Tuesday, November 12, 2013

2nd paper compare/contrast rough draft


Triumph and Tragedy

Mr. Escalantes from “Stand and Deliver” and Mr. Keating from “Dead Poets Society” were teaching to inspire their students.  Mr. Escalantes was teaching at an urban school in Los Angeles during the 1980’s and Mr. Keating was teaching a boys prep school in New England during the 1950’s.  Both of the teachers loved teaching and showed that through their humor, inspiration and dedication to their students ending in triumph and tragedy.

You can tell that each teacher loves teaching through their humor.  Mr. Escalantes heart was for showing his students to reach above the normal – normal in their school was: being part of a gang, babysitting your brothers and sisters while both parents are earning a living, or living with your grandmother and helping her when she is ill.  Mr. Escalantes used their environment in a humorous way.  He began by speaking to them the way they spoke to each other, but he was funny in doing it.  In the classroom on the second day of class he used slang like, “Whatchagot” or “I’ll see you in People’s Court” and goes on to Chuco who says that he does the work in his head.  Mr. Escalante says, “Ohhh! You know the times tables?” Chuco sticks up his thumb and proceeds saying, “I know the ones; (second finger) I know the twos; (sticking up his middle finger) I know the threes…” Mr. Escalante then says, “Finger man, I heard about you.  Are you the finger man? I’m the finger man too”, he then goes on to show a trick for multiplying by 9.

Mr. Keating was a teacher that had also gone to the same school as his students but doesn’t teach them the way he was taught, strictly by the rules.  He wants them to “look at things a different way”. You see his humor  first day of class as he was calling out students names and he came to Mr. Pitts, he says, “Mr. Pitts an unfortunate name” in a funny, sarcastic way.  Another day in the class room he was using different actors and imitating their voices.  One was John Wayne.  Using the tone and swagger says, “or Macbeth, Is this the dagger I see before me?”  With all the actors he imitates it left the students laughing and enjoying being a part of the poetry class which wasn’t dull and boring.

Not only were they both humorous teachers but had a special way of inspiring their students.  Mr. Escalantes was excellent in math.  He didn’t just teach basic math, but immediately started with algebra.  His second day of school he came dressed as a butcher holding a meat cleaver; he swings down and cuts an apple in half.  (He has parts of apples cut up on the students desks).   He asks Claudia, “Whatchagot?” “It’s an apple”, “How much”, “what do you mean”, the students are confused at this point and finally gets to Ana who whispers “missing 25%”, “That’s right”.  He goes on to explain the multiplication of fractions.  As the class progresses through Algebra, Mr. Escalantes discovers that they have great potential and decides that the school needs a calculus program.  He then challenges them to prove it and through long, arduous study gets them to understand their own abilities and possibilities.  He had a quick-trick approach which helped them through the rigors of passing the calculus exam. 

Mr. Keating takes his students out of the normal teaching environment of “route” learning and brings them to dream differently than what the normal is.  Even though the school is a “prep school” and all of the students are “heading toward Harvard”, he wants to inspire them in a deeper way.  His first day of school shows him walking into the classroom, whistling the 1812 Overture.  He takes them out of class into the hall of “Past Students”, giving them the idea of “carpe diem” meaning to “Seize the Day” inviting the students to call him “Oh Captain, My Captain!” referencing a Walt Whitman poem. He asks the students to look at the past to see what they have learned and that they are “destined to great things” and to “Seize the Day”.  He goes on in the movie inspiring them with activities that show how to apply the poetry to life.  He takes them out to the football field and gives them each a ball as they kick the ball they quote part of a poem and end up playing a game on the field building team work and comradeship together with their teacher.

Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating both were looked at from their fellow teachers as odd.  They were dedicated but it made the other teachers upset with them that they didn’t do the bare minimum or go by the rules of the school.  Mr. Escalantes was in a teachers meeting as they were discussing how to get more funding for the school, worried that they would loose their accreditation.  The attitude of the faculty, including the principle was, “You can’t teach logarithms to illerates.  Look, these kids come to us with barely a seventh grade education. There isn’t a teacher in this room who isn’t doing everything they possibly can.” Mr. Escalantes knows he could do more and says, “I could teach more”, Ortega (Head of Math program) says, “I’m sure of Mr. Escalantes good intentions, but he’s only been here a few months.” He was dedicated enough to want to go the “second mile” and put forth the effort necessary to show how the students could do it.  In a different meeting he had said, “Students will arise to the level of expectations”.  After the kids had taken their calculus exam and passed, they were accused of cheating.  Mr. Escalantes goes to bat for them, getting them to take the exam again, and finally getting the school calculus program started. 

Mr. Keating was always doing something in his classroom that the other teachers disapproved.  His style was more for allowing the students the chance to be “free thinkers”.  At dinner Mr. McCallister brings up an earlier situation and told Mr. Keating that his class was “fascinating, but misguided”, Mr. Keating is understanding the criticism of his way, but stands his ground stating that he is helping them become “free thinkers”.  Through the whole conversation Mr. Keating is standing for what he knows is best for the students, dedicated to bringing out their closed minds.  During his classes he taught the students things like: “life exists, identify”, “the play goes on”, “this is a battle, a war for your soul, you will learn to think for yourselves, words & ideas can change the world!” He was showing them how to step out from the world they are in to a world waiting for change.

Even though both of the teachers loved teaching, they were all about bringing more from their students whether it was excelling in math or looking for something more from life.  They ended up with total different endings.  Mr. Escalante was instrumental in getting the school their accreditation, getting the math program built up and setting the standard for the school in the area of math.  While on the other end of the spectrum, Mr. Keating in his “free thinking way” ended up getting fired from the school.  Neal, one of his students did not want to be a doctor but an actor.  His father was against anything that would distract Neal from the goal of medical school.  In the end, Neal was so distraught over his father’s desire that he committed suicide, resulting in the school’s criticism of the way Mr. Keating taught on the line of “free thinking”.  It was a tragedy, ending up with Mr. Keating getting fired.  But still with the respect from his students who would always call him “Oh Captain, My Captain”.

Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating were both teachers who loved teaching.  They showed that through their humor, inspiration and dedication to their students, ending in triumph for Mr. Escalantes and tragedy for Mr. Keating. 

 

 

 

 

 

Monday, November 11, 2013

Compare/Contrast Outline


Compare/Contrast - Rough draft/outline for 2nd assignment due 11-10-13

Title:  Getting Inspired

Thesis Sentence:  Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating loved teaching and showed that love by their humor, inspiration and their dedication to their students while facing the challenges of teaching in two different types of schools, in two different eras but had two different endings.

I.                   Introductory paragraph:  Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating were teaching in two different types of schools, in two different eras with a great desire to inspire their students to reach above their environment. Mr. Escalantes was teaching at an urban school in Las Angeles during the 1980’s and Mr. Keating was teaching a boys prep school in New England during the 1950’s.  Both of the teachers loved teaching and showed that through their humor, inspiration and dedication to their students while facing the challenges of teaching in two different types of schools and in different eras with two different endings.

 

II.                 Humor

a.      Mr. Escalantes

                                                              i.      Speaking to students with their lingo

                                                            ii.      Finger man example

b.     Mr. Keating

                                                              i.      Mr. Pitts – “unfortunate name” example

                                                            ii.      Imitations of different actors example

III.              Inspiration

a.      Mr. Escalantes

                                                              i.      Cut up apple example

                                                            ii.      Challenging students with going for calculus exam

b.     Mr. Keating

                                                              i.      1st day of class in hallway “Oh Captain My Captain”

                                                            ii.      Soccor field example

 

IV.              Dedication

a.     Mr. Escalantes

                                                              i.      Teacher meeting example

                                                            ii.      Going to bat for students when accused of cheating

b.     Mr. Keating

                                                              i.      Teachers at dinner table

                                                            ii.      Showing students how to get outside normal thinking

V.                Different endings        

a.     Mr. Escalantes

                                                              i.      Was able to get the calculus program started in his school

b.     Mr. Keating

                                                              i.      Fired from school because of tragedy

VI.              Concluding paragraph:

Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating were both teachers who loved teaching.  They showed that through their humor, inspiration and dedication to their students but the outcome of both teachers were far different.  As Mr. Escalantes brought the calculus program to the school while Mr. Keating was fired for his “free thinking” ways he inspired his students to have.

Compare/Contrast - Thesis and Intro Paragraph


 
Title: Triumph and Tragedy

Thesis Sentence:  Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating loved teaching and showed that love by their humor, inspiration and their dedication to their students while facing the challenges of teaching in two different types of schools, in two different eras but had two different endings.

I.                   Introductory paragraph:  Mr. Escalantes and Mr. Keating were teaching in two different types of schools, in two different eras with a great desire to inspire their students to reach above their environment. Mr. Escalantes was teaching at an urban school in Las Angeles during the 1980’s and Mr. Keating was teaching a boys prep school in New England during the 1950’s.  Both of the teachers loved teaching and showed that through their humor, inspiration and dedication to their students while facing the challenges of teaching in two different types of schools and in different eras with two different endings.

 

Monday, November 4, 2013

Differences between Mr. Keating and Mr. Escalantes 10-30-13 from group discussion

They are similar and different.

Mr. Keating is teaching at a Boys Prep School in New England, time period is the 1950's,

Mr. Escalantes is teaching at an Urban School in LA, time period is 1980's.

They both use illustrations in their classroom to get the attention of their students. For example:
Mr. Escalantes dressed in a chef outfit and cut apples in different sizes for the students to try and figure out what percentage they were.
Mr.Keating took students out in crossway to look at past pictures of students and picturing the "dead students" to what is in the future.

Mr. Escalantes method of teaching was more of using student language, coming from their point of view.
Mr. Keating pulls students toward his way of thinking and drawing them to picture higher / different thoughts.

The economic status of both schools were at different ends of the spectrum.  Mr. Escalantes class was mostly student where parents were working hard and long hours just to make a living.
Mr. Keating students were expected to go on to law, medical schools from their parents (who wasn't interested in them, but in status).

Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Dead Poet's Society - Notes 10-29-13

New England Small Boys Prep School - Welton

First Scene:  2 young boys getting picture taken.  At Graduation ceremony with banners marching into room.  Looks like a church service.  "The Light of Knowledge" given to boys sharing the candle.  Speaker:  What are the four pillars? Discipline, patience, excellence.   Introduction of new teacher (Robin Williams).

After ceremony:  Everyone greeting at door.  Families saying goodbye to the boys.

Roommates .  Boys in hallway going to rooms, In room:  Boys coming in teasing about summer school:  Going over 4 principles.  Smoking, Introductin...Todd Anderson, ...Silverstreak....welcome to ...knock, knoci  "Father I thought you'd gone" Father, "you're taking too many extra curricular activities", son, "wouldn't be fair"...getting balled out from father..."don't speak to me that way in front of others" "you know how much this means to your mother", "Yes, sir", pondering in outside of room, upset.  "Don't tell me how to talk to my father", "What are you going to do" I'm dropping what I have to" "Latin", "Join us Todd".

Boys going down to class:
 Chemistry.  Teacher..."due to tomorrow"
Latin: Teacher - route memorization
Trigonometry: Teacher, going over rules "will be penalized"
Mr. Keeting (Robin Williams) comes in whisteling around the room, leaves "Well, come on", all go out into hall as he whistles.  Recites a poem "Oh captain, my captain", "who knows where that comes from" ; INtroduces self, calls on Mr. Piss "Unfortunate name" to read from book, seize the day while ye may...Asks students what its about.  Gives an illustration of poem.

Illustration:  Cruiz past old students pictures:  "Listen to them, what are they whispering from the grave" "seize the day boys, make your lives extraordinary".  They all go out discussing the class.  "Spooky", "Weird".

Shower room:  Boys discussing studying, plans.  "Come to study group"

In the room, student writing "seize the day", crumples paper and throws it away. 
Knox Silverspoon and principle driving in car to go dinner at Danberries home.

Study hall:  boys discussing, Knox sharing about meeting such a beautiful girl at dinner.  Can't forget her, can't think aboaut trig...Teacher, "All right boys, 5 minutes"...

Mr. Keeting's classroom:  "Understanding Poetry"....reading about poem & objection/importance.
Mr. Keeting writes on board, like a formula. Discribe poetry.  "Rip out entire page in book", "tear out entire introduction", "I want Mr. Princhard out of here, I want nothing left of it".  Everyone rips out pages, Mr Galister comes in "Whats going on here" Mr. Keeting comes back with garbage can.  Throwing papers away.  "In my class you will learn to think for yourself, words will change the world".  Taking a different teaching method other than the book. 

"We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race, and the human race is full of passion" "life exists, power of the play goes on and you may contribute a verse" "What will your verse be"?

Dinner Scene:  Teachers at table, discussing Mr. Keetings class.  Telling Mr. Keeting his way is wrong.  Mr. Keeting developing "free thinkers"

Boys table, senior annual, "Dead poets society".

Next day in school ground asking Mr. Keeting about dead poets society.  "What was it" "Dead poets were dedictated of sucking marrow out of life"  "Let poetry work its magic, let it drip like honey"
Walks away whisteling.  Boys discussing going to cave tonight.  "Be careful, can't get caught."  "Whos in" ...all decide to go to cave,

In study hall, discussing how to get there, "don't read, come and listen" , in bathroom all getting ready for bed, boys getting flashlights and ready to go to cave.  Taking poetry book with them, sneaking out, dark, dog barking.  Dark out. Spooky, misty, foggy.  Running through woods.  Found cave, starting fire, smoke everywhere.  Forget fire.  "Reconvene dead poets society" Reading from book, going to "marked pages" reading exerpts.  Putting in food in pile.  Reading more exerpts.  Telling spooky stories.  Memorized poem:  shows picture of naked lady, read made up poem.  Next: Tennyson, "Come my friends to seak, to find, not to yield" .  Acting all silly, rapping poem, leave to their rapping poem, sneak back to school. 

Next day:  exhausted in class, Mr. Keeting...asking students.  "Wiliam Shakespear" , giving illustrations of different actors, John Wayne, ...then reads a poem.  funny description in different
"constantly look at things in a different way" (standing on desk)  "must try to look at things in a different way" boys all get up on desk and look around.  "break out" "dare to strike out and find new ground", for essays "compose your own poem deliver on Monday". 

Different scenes:  rowing on lake.  Competition.  Boys getting radion going, sword fighting.  Dancing on roof. 
in room, roommate "wants to act" trying out for Midsummers night dream.  Talks about asking father to get permission.  Doesn't want to ask father, wants to enjoy idea for awhile. Neal running around room, chasing each other.  Acting crazy.  (Neal's father has heavy hand on him.)

Mr. Keeting taking boys out to soccor field: Gave each one a paper with a part of poem on it.  Music starts up as boys read papers, kicking balls.

Neal all excited "I got the part".  Roommate "how are going to do this", Neal forges permission letters to be accepted into play.  Obviously not going to ask father. 

Classroom:  students reading own poem.  Boys laugh at each other. "don't let your poems be ordinary" Todd Anderson "you're up" Worst fear, embarrassing, . Mr. Keeting writing on board. 
Making Todd go up front and  "YAWP".  he's shy. Mr. Keeting doing demonstrations with Todd, ends up getting a poem and making a discovery of self "can do it".

Playing soccer and put Mr. Keeting up carrying him.  Boys in cave, smoking.  talking about smoking pipes.   Neal brings in a lamp, "god of the cave".  Saxaphone...lets start this meeting. "gotta be more"
Knox"I can't take it no more" I'm gonna call her.  Has crush on Kris Danberry girl, trying to call her, all scared.  Calls her, gets asked to party on Friday night.  Going to party. Point is "She was thinking about me" "only met her once and she was thinking about me" "she is going to be mine"...

Poety class illustration:  Strolling in circle, getting the beat, in a cadence. "everyone started out with their own pace" "BEliefs unique" "find the one less traveled by".  Find your own walk, walking around being silly, going against the stream.  . 

Weekend, Todd sitting out, his birthday.  Same gift from parents as last year.  "Desk set" Neal cheering him up "desk set wants to fly" They throw it off the roof.  "oh well I wouldn't worry, you'll get another one next year". 

In dead poets cave, Charles brings a couple of girls. 

Mr. Keeting using many live examples which is a way that Mr. Escalante used.

 

Monday, October 28, 2013

Similarities/differences between Mr. Escalante and Mr. MacFarland, how or how not?


 
Similarities:

Quizzing students on a regular basis.  Giving them plenty of work.  Mr. MacFarland brought a prep school curriculum to the school; Mr. Escalante brought the calculus to his school.  They both walked around the room and asked questions to get the students thinking.

Mr. MacFarland  “slowly and carefully built up our knowledge of Western intellectual history-with facts, with connections, with speculations.”

Mr. Escalante would work the problems using some similar methods, connections and speculations, like the apple demonstration, where he cut part of the apple out and asked what was left? 

MacFarland's barbs were literary. “If Jim Fitzsimmons, hung over and irritable, tried to smart-ass him, he'd rejoin with a flourish that would spark the indomitable Skip Madison - who'd lost his front teeth in a hapless tackle - to flick his tongue through the gap and opine, "good chop," drawing out the single "0" in stinging indictment.”  “The notorious Voc. Ed. crowd settled down as well when MacFarland took the podium.”

Mr. Escalantes took control of his classroom from the first day, by rearranging the seating, speaking on the kids level, having a reply to every student’s smart-alecky remark.

Mr. MacFarland tapped Mike Rose’s oId interest in reading and creating stories giving him a way to feel special by using mind.

Mr. Escalantes tapped into the students minds and made them feel like they could do it.  His attitude was, “Students will arise to the level of expectations”.

Differences:
Mr. Escalante lived in a home, had a family, he was neat and tidy, had come to the college with

Mr. MacFarland  was single, lived in an apartment which was cluttered with cigarette butts all over.  He was also a “tobacco-stained intellectual”.  He seems like a frumpy, disheveled teacher.

Part 2 Stand and Deliver - My Reactions

I feel the stress that it takes to study for a test like that.  I can't relate to Mr. Escalante, but I can relate to the students.  I've already shared in my first essay about learning and growing through the process of taxes.  I also had to study and take the test for IRS called "Registered Tax Return Preparer".  This test was a 3 hour test, 120 questions and was a required test if I wanted to be rehired for the next tax season.  I had started studying before the end of the tax season - 2012, which was around April.  I planned on taking my test in August.  The first couple of months I studied randomly, there were vacations and other things that kept me busy after the tax season.  Then as time progressed I really started pushing in July for the test in August.  I studied everyday, a couple hours per day.  Then took the practice test through the company I was working for.  I knew if I passed that test I would pass the IRS test.  I had to take the practice test 3 times before I got a passing grade, I knew I was ready.  The morning of the test I had to catch the ferry from Kingston to Edmonds and go to a testing office, where that's all they do is  testing.  All a new experience for me.  I got there by 9 a.m., signed in, started my test.  I worked hard at getting all the answers finished and was done by the 3 hour time.  (You got immediate results if you passed or not).  So I went out of the room, extremely exhausted and emotionally drained.  I waited as the testers checked me out and gave me my results.  I was so tense about it.  As they got the results and put their "seal" on it, I realized that I had actually passed!!  It was such a relief, when I got out to my car I burst into tears.  There was so much pressure released.  But another accomplishment.

I can feel their anticipation and pressure as they prepare for this exam, plus all the pressure of not letting down Mr. Escalantes, and taking the test and passing.  But then the crash of being accused of "cheating".  What a blow after all that work.  I found myself very upset with the testing board and not believing the students.  But to give the students credit for retaking and passing the test.  It was a great ending.